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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 4:35 pm

he went mad

(That is not the problem. The problem is the meaning of it. The grammar is not wrong, but in the combination of the other words it just sounds wierd. "Has been killed" killed sounds like he's dead already, and being killed again (so does had been though...). But with my post of "but then he" the words "has been killed" won't really fit, as "but then he" is saying that he's doing something or that something is been done to him. So, after thinking about it, you were not wrong in the grammar, it was just the two posts that made it sound wierd. Can we just leave it at that? Either way I'm done with English grammar:P Got enough of that in school already^^)

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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 4:47 pm

and threw his

(well, we`re talking about the past here and the most important thing for us are results of that what happened in the past, so I used present perfect and it `s correct. I could use past simple here. You`re right Alanna, it can sound weird, but anyway he shouldn`t have changed my sentence)
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 4:59 pm

computer into the

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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 5:06 pm

big container filled
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 5:12 pm

Avenging Angel Mike wrote:
big container filled

with giant stinky

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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 5:18 pm

what smells as
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 5:46 pm

Avenging Angel Mike.

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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 6:10 pm

>.<
Thought we were done with this...
Maybe lock this one, and start over again?

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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   Tue May 20, 2008 6:21 pm

Continue the flaming and you'll be banned from the forum, Mike and Mastar. Master will be demoted to member as well if he continues
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